May 14 by A Wikia contributor

I have come up with my own version of the prom massacre scene, reply with your thoughts on it.

After the blood has been dumped and the laughing has started, Carrie stands up from her blood-soaked throne and stares out at the crowd, tears rolling down her bloodied cheeks. Miss Desjarden and Helen rush on stage and Helen runs to Tommy’s unconscious body (one of the two buckets had fallen on his head) while Rita Desjarden tries to help Carrie. Suddenly, the gymnasium gets colder, and everyone has chills sent down their spines, seazing the laughter. Carrie seems to loose consciousness, and she blankly stares out at the room, her arms raised, making a large T. Hanging decorations swirl about as their blown by an unnoticed telekinetic force, and one of the spotlights malfuctions, sending purple sparks down to the stage. The doors slam shut, and lock, with a loud click, all at once. One of the doors slams shut on Frieda who had walked half-way through the doorframe, when the metal doors shut on her, severing her into half. Another door closes on Denny’s hand, severing his index finger, and he wails in pain. This causes a panic near the rear of the crowd, while the front are still bewitched by the telekinetic winds. With a flash of light, the lights seem to shut off for a moment, then come back on, tinted red. Like an invisible person had picked them up, knives, scissors, pencials, and pens hovered from their tables and shelves, and seemed to aim mid-air at the shocked crowd; at the same time, Carrie hovers above the bloody stage, and begins to breathe heavily. Carrie plummets back down to the stage, landing crouched down, and this sends the aimed objects flying at the teenaged boys and girls, while also sending a shockwave with hurtles tables and chairs, which also shatters Heather’s glasses, and this blinds her when the glass shards fly back into her eyes, and she screams in agnoy and anguish when a few of the knives and scissors stab into her arched back, and she drops, dead. A string of dim lights snaps out of place and flings through the crowd at a high speed, cutting through limbs and torsos and necks, killing most of the people right there and then. A panicked Nicki is banging on the gym doors when the string of lights flies through the back of her neck, severing her lower jaw from her upper jaw, and she also drops, dead. At the same time, Miss Desjarden is hurtled from the stage and thrown the length of the gym into the floor, giving her an intense nose bleed and breaking her left leg. The floor is littered with ripped decorations, popped balloons, glass shards, sauces and drinks, blood, severed limbs, wires, broken furniture, and corpses in pairs, singles, or massive piles. Groaning and moaning comes from the half-dead bodies, and a few get up, and begin running to the doors. A stage light collapses to the stage, breaking the glass bulb and revealing the wires, with starts a minor fire. The running people’s shoes stab into people’s backs and hips, breaking bones, causing arteries to implode, and of course, heavy bleeding. The fire alarms set off, panicking even more people. Prinicpal Morton got up and ran to the stage and gripped the microphone and began yelling instructions at the confused survivors, when bolts of electrical energy fly through his body and he is electrocuted, and he falls to the stage, next to the shattered spotlight, and like snakes the wires wrap around his corpse and squeeze like boas, setting his blue tuxedo ablaze. The backdrop catches fire, and the sprinkler system turns on, immediately electrocuting two of the singers in the main band, along with their gutairist. Chaperones and guests slip and slide in the puddles of water, falling and screaming. Tina, Norma, Helen, and Vic, the prom’s announcer, form a small group, and while Norma stays to tend to Miss Desjarden’s broken nose and leg, the rest run to pick up Tommy’s unconscious body to save him from the hellish inferno. Helen looks at Carrie, gets up, and tries to tell her to evacuate from the stage otherwise the flames will consume her in seconds, when a rope with a hook on it’s end used for moving props swings down, and right into Helen’s right collar-bone, and she swings on the rope until it slows and stops, where she would slide further down the hook, slicing open her neck and face. Daniel, a friend of Tommy’s attempts to succeed in helping Carrie, but he fails the task like Helen, and a girder covered in 220 cables and dangerous equipment lands on him, where the cables and equipment hits the puddles of water, and he is consumed in the flames, pinned to the stage floor, where his corpse is then telekinetically thrown to the side like trash. Carrie seazes the sprinkler systems, and then watches with a devilish grin as Rhodna’s dress nears the sparking cables and shattered spotlights and sets ablaze, and she dances like a crazed puppet when she’s electrocuted, and she falls to the floor, still violently shaking. Josie runs for one of the fire exits when he’s pinned to the wall by telekinetic force, and then, is killed when a basketball rafter above breaks out of place, and swings down, crushing his lower spine and stomach. He choked on blood, his screaming transforming into gurgling, and his life is drained out of him. He is soon on fire as the cyclone of flames whirls around the room in minutes, due to the flammable table-cloths, ribbons, streamers, strings of lights, hanging stars, and paper hearts taped to the painted brick wall. Tina drops to her knees, wetting her now stained, greasy, torn purple gown with a golden bow on the back in the puddles of water, and began to pleed. Her dirty blonde hair was wet and wild, with long streaks of various liquids staining her golden curls brown. Carrie noticed tears rolling down Tina’s face while a near-unconscious Desjarden lays in Norma’s lap, trying to keep her strength. Vic was banging on one of the fire doors. When Carrie saw Desjarden in that state, a sudden wave of sympathy and kindness filled her, and she now knew she had to let her caring coach survive, and with that, she telekinetically opens an air vent above a buffet table, and Norma looks gratefully at Carrie and whispers, “Thank you,” before getting up and helping Desjarden into the vent. Norma climbed in, Vic, Tina, one of the Chaperones, and two students following her and Desjarden. The others were history. Carrie returns to her murderous trance, and looks at the scoreboard now leaning towards the water, cables hanging from it, dangling inches, no, centimeters above the water puddles. With a moment of concentrated thought, Carrie telekinetically brings down the scoreboard, which hits the water. A bright flash of light occurs, and everyone screams at once, then it’s silent, as they drop to the floor, their life drained out of their poor bodies. Lifeless beings dropped and landed in piles, and after a minute or two, the electrical signals travelling through the water faded and stopped, allowing Carrie to freely walk through the burning gym, and she leaves through the main exit, which closes behind her again, and a few survivors inside still run and bang on the glass windows, their hands leaving bloody handprints, their cries and screams soon drained out by the noise, and are completely stopped when their life is crushed when the school explodes. Only 7 - 8 made it out, leaving over 100 to die in the inferno.